From the feedback I received, what went well for my college
magazine was that I used the same font which makes it easier for my target
audience to read. It was appropriate, as the text was clear and the colour of
the text was eye catching. The colour scheme was appropriate and it slightly
suitable for my college magazine, which does catch the eye of some of my
audience. From one of my peer’s feedback, I was told that my colour choice wasn’t
the best, as it was too bright and it took away the attention of the purpose of
the text. The magazine is really suitable to my audience and it is very
eye-catching. From one of my peer’s, there has been lots of effort made. It has
the purpose to inform my audience about college life and what kind of gossip is
out there, in college. Through my feedback, I have been told that it does link
to my target audience as it is based on college life and not anything else. The
teasers, coverlines and images all link to the purpose of my magazine. It has
some slight use of buzz words, to create a sense of urge to turn the page and
read the article. Again, my images are very suitable and link back to my
magazine. My pictures were carefully taken and chosen, and they all had a
purpose behind it, not just to look good on the page. My Photoshop skills have
developed slowly but gradually, as my finishing product was mainly positive. I will
be looking forward to using the proper cameras instead of my phone camera, as
the definition of the picture should be exquisite due to such high quality of a
camera. My layout of my contents page is simple, but not too hard to figure out
where things are. I used buzz words, a skyline and many coverlines, linking to
college and my audience. I need to improve on the consistency of my font use,
as I used a range to show which parts of the magazine had more importance and
purpose.
3 key points for development when producing main task:
1.
Try to plan out my use of colours before I start
making my magazine, by sketching out my plan first.
2.
Try to make more of a complex layout for my
content page, instead of making my double page spread and front page look
immense and leaving the content page dull.
3.
Try to make a foundation plan, by making some Photoshop
covers to see which one I may go with and develop further.
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