For the front page i like the use of a creative font and the use of bright colours makes the text stand out. To improve the magazine i would recommend using a lot more of the space left.
I really like the colour used on the front cover as it stands out on the background. I like the placement of cover line as it relates to the front cover image, also I think the ' free hip hop poster inside' should have been in a different colour for example red so that it stands out more than the rest of the text on the page.
I like the cover lines that you have used and the colour scheme. The model used is relevant to your genre. However, I feel that you should've added more to your front page.
For the front page i like the use of a creative font and the use of bright colours makes the text stand out. To improve the magazine i would recommend using a lot more of the space left.
ReplyDeleteI really like the colour used on the front cover as it stands out on the background. I like the placement of cover line as it relates to the front cover image, also I think the ' free hip hop poster inside' should have been in a different colour for example red so that it stands out more than the rest of the text on the page.
ReplyDeleteThings you done well:
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- Layout of cover lines
- The pound and euro pricing
Improvements:
- remove the outline on skyline
Great layout, coverlines, teaser and main model. However the magazine has gaps so fill them or rearrange.Remove outline on skyline.
ReplyDeleteI like the cover lines that you have used and the colour scheme. The model used is relevant to your genre. However, I feel that you should've added more to your front page.
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