The DPS is really well done and makes the magazine look good, i like the use of gigs dates beside the image giving it importance and making it stand out. To improve the magazine i would recommend considering the use colours since they do go well together however some of the text may be difficult to see. personally i think that your contents page is my favourite part.
I like the gig dates- adds a real vibe to your magazine. I like the added info on your artist at the beginning. The pull quotes are great as they make me want to read on. Journalistic piece also suits your target audience of 16-25 year olds.
However, some of the pull quote and text is hard to read, maybe because of the colours. Add more questions! This length does not enable fans to learn a lot about the artist.
Things you done well: - Use of images from photo shoot - Attractive - Layout - Journalistic style - The column of gig dates Improvements: - Remove the drop shadow from the quote looks a bit microsoft wordy
The DPS is really well done and makes the magazine look good, i like the use of gigs dates beside the image giving it importance and making it stand out. To improve the magazine i would recommend considering the use colours since they do go well together however some of the text may be difficult to see. personally i think that your contents page is my favourite part.
ReplyDeleteI like the gig dates- adds a real vibe to your magazine. I like the added info on your artist at the beginning. The pull quotes are great as they make me want to read on. Journalistic piece also suits your target audience of 16-25 year olds.
ReplyDeleteHowever, some of the pull quote and text is hard to read, maybe because of the colours. Add more questions! This length does not enable fans to learn a lot about the artist.
ReplyDeleteThings you done well:
ReplyDelete- Use of images from photo shoot
- Attractive
- Layout
- Journalistic style
- The column of gig dates
Improvements:
- Remove the drop shadow from the quote looks a bit microsoft wordy