The contents page looks really good, the use of images are really inviting and the easy text makes the contents page look attractive. To improve the magazine i would consider the colour used for the text as some parts are quite difficult to read.
I can see where you have used the design of XXL (B-SIDE, A-SIDE). I like the layout and additional photography. However, the colour of the text makes it hard to read certain editorial items.
Things you done well: - Use of images from photo shoot and additional photography - Attractive - Layout of the b side - The content of regulars and features Improvements: - Indicate what is the cover story - Arrange layout of A side
My first impression of the contents page is it very simple and relates to the target audience by the context on the page. I like the photography images used I think it suits the idea of the magazine, although I think to improve it page 2, some of text is difficult to read so change the colour.
I really like the colour scheme that you have used throughout each piece. It has been consistent. I also like the additional photography that you have used. However I feel like it is a bit busy.
The contents page looks really good, the use of images are really inviting and the easy text makes the contents page look attractive. To improve the magazine i would consider the colour used for the text as some parts are quite difficult to read.
ReplyDeleteI can see where you have used the design of XXL (B-SIDE, A-SIDE). I like the layout and additional photography. However, the colour of the text makes it hard to read certain editorial items.
ReplyDeleteThings you done well:
ReplyDelete- Use of images from photo shoot and additional photography
- Attractive
- Layout of the b side
- The content of regulars and features
Improvements:
- Indicate what is the cover story
- Arrange layout of A side
My first impression of the contents page is it very simple and relates to the target audience by the context on the page. I like the photography images used I think it suits the idea of the magazine, although I think to improve it page 2, some of text is difficult to read so change the colour.
ReplyDeleteI really like the colour scheme that you have used throughout each piece. It has been consistent. I also like the additional photography that you have used. However I feel like it is a bit busy.
ReplyDelete